Patricia the first paper shots were good, i think you could shoot the tempo thing in a brighter area so it becomes more apparent and eye pleasing. 5.1 abstract instrumental film?
yeahm im gonna agree with rene. I think that the first shot is nice, I like how you kept the paper a little yellow, it gives it character. Try to think of different ways to get from point A to point B, for example instead of a slow zoom out to reveal the piano, how else can you start close and come wide? I think it's a great start and I cant wait to see more.
I really like the shots. (maybe you could also post your awesome kaleidoscope shot!) I really think that shot is amazing and would make a great beginning to your movie. I think your shots are all really good and can definatly be incorporated into your idea that we discussed today. I also really liked your new idea, a combination of your previous ideas.
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Patricia the first paper shots were good, i think you could shoot the tempo thing in a brighter area so it becomes more apparent and eye pleasing. 5.1 abstract instrumental film?
yeahm im gonna agree with rene. I think that the first shot is nice, I like how you kept the paper a little yellow, it gives it character. Try to think of different ways to get from point A to point B, for example instead of a slow zoom out to reveal the piano, how else can you start close and come wide? I think it's a great start and I cant wait to see more.
I really like the shots. (maybe you could also post your awesome kaleidoscope shot!) I really think that shot is amazing and would make a great beginning to your movie. I think your shots are all really good and can definatly be incorporated into your idea that we discussed today.
I also really liked your new idea, a combination of your previous ideas.
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